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If the sun does not rise for me tomorrow
Don't bathe in your sorrow
Don't come and mourn
Even though I am torn
I will see the light at the end of the tunnel

If you wallow in your tears for me
The person I was, please see
Remember me at my best, not at my worst
Like when we laughed excessively, for a first
Or when I looked into your eyes and realized
That maybe something in life could be idolized

If the sun does not rise for me tomorrow
Think of me
But let your future be full
This is for :iconwordsneverfail:'s contest: [link] They prompted deviants to compose an inspirational poem, so I wrote this. I can't exactly say this is inspirational. It is, in a sense. The limit was 100 words. Certainly not enough, but I made it work. =P

This poem was inspired by the death of a classmate and what I think she would want us to think of her.
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MarstersStalker77 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2011
this is beautiful =')
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ReneeStone Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you~ <3
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alyth3cat Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2011
This for me felt like a suicide letter... it's moving and sad and eerie. I'm sorry for your loss. This was a great piece of writing. :)
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ReneeStone Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! :)
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alyth3cat Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2011
You're welcome.
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The-Jedi-Ninja Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2011
This is really touching. :)
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ReneeStone Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :hug:
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drop-of-sun Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
♥!
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ReneeStone Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you again! :glomp:
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drop-of-sun Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:) you're welcom!
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